I've started writing a screenplay for what I'm hoping to be a series of webisodes. It's about a film graduate who, due to the lack of jobs, resorts to posting a craigslist ad in which he'll film a couple having sex for a reasonable fee. It'll eventually turn into him and two of his friends (both dealing with unemployment) starting an amateur porn business which is extremely successful because of a tiny, creepy man and his gigantic member.
There's no nudity. It's a dark comedy. But really I just need some feedback. I should be finished writing the first webisode soon, so if I'd be able to post it here and get some advice that would be great!